Good day to die

RL Commission for [Q] of Gaia Online. -hmm..first time this style was ordered-

I don't know how the hell that happened to him, but the idea is that character dying somewhere in a dark alley 8D

Honestly, the details were killing me. I didn't know what to shade and what not The background was inspired from a photo I saw on google somewhere. I wish I could have been inspired by Durarara too *sigh*
This isn't the original version. I used some photoshop filter for this one and I kinda liked it better than this original piece [link] What do you think?? xD

Mediums used: pentel pen, whiteboard marker, pencils, techpens & gelpens
Time: 56323454354hours+days...gaaah I don't know anymore *dies*